Last weekend was a good day.
It was a nice weekend last week.
Last weekend指整個周末，不單單是一日。
It was a warm weather.
The weather was nice and warm.
My father decided to drive the white car and took us to the mountain picnic.
My father decided to drive the white car and took us to the mountain for a picnic.
We didn't get gasoline on the way, so we went to gasoline station to refuel.
We did not get gasoline on the way, so we went to a gasoline station to refuel the car.
寫作中不要用簡化詞如 don't, hasn't, I'd 等等，除非是寫對話。
Gasoline station需要用冠詞article (a/an/the)放在前。
Refuel都可以，但此句未談及car，所以我會說清楚一點。
Finally, we arrived the mountain top and began picnic.
可以！:-)
相信你是初學者，所以5分我會給3.5至4分。
你繼續努力呀！
多嘗試、多發問、多參考，就可以學到更多的知識。
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